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Ship out.

Go.

Leave me alone.

Bitter memories.

You never once heard my cry.

Nor did you feel my tears as they fell.

So go.

Ship out.

Gather your things

And head out into the horizon.

I won’t try to stop you

This time.
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:iconryugekko:
good work on this one
like running-out-of-thyme says, lots of story with minimal words.
I myself am a minimalist.
nice job
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:iconrunning-out-of-thyme:
This is really good. Says a lot with few words.
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:iconraylah:
Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it.
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:iconturbopat:
~turbopat Jan 2, 2009   Writer
This feels like a song to me. Nice work.
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:iconraylah:
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.
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