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Ship out.

Go.

Leave me alone.

Bitter memories.

You never once heard my cry.

Nor did you feel my tears as they fell.

So go.

Ship out.

Gather your things

And head out into the horizon.

I won’t try to stop you

This time.
idk
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RYUGEKKO Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2009
good work on this one
like running-out-of-thyme says, lots of story with minimal words.
I myself am a minimalist.
nice job
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running-out-of-thyme Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2009
This is really good. Says a lot with few words.
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Raylah Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2009
Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it.
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running-out-of-thyme Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2009
welcome. :)
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turbopat Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2009   Writer
This feels like a song to me. Nice work.
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Raylah Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2009
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.
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